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Title: The Quiet Life

Rating: R. Non-con (not descriptive, but it’s there, towards the end.)

Pairings: Non-con Mylar … for now …

Warnings: If you haven’t watched all of Season 1 of Heroes, you shouldn’t be here, you should wait and watch the DVDs!

Disclaimer: Uh … obviously I don’t own Heroes, because if I did, I’d have the Mywalker family on screen eventually …

Summary: Sylar threatens Molly to get some Mohinder lovin’ the List but some weird guys burst in and Sylar takes Mohinder and Molly on a wacky road trip that leads to smut.

My Thoughts: This will become my ideal map for season 2 and onward. Hiro’s probably in past Japan or something, and the rest of the cast are working on the guy worse than Sylar. But Sylar, Mohinder, and Molly are traveling the world on their own, and gradually Sylar becomes Gabriel without a mind wipe and when they return at the beginning of the imagined season 3 he’s a good guy. With some major anti-hero qualities. But it’ll be dark, disturbing, and scary for a while.  

 

 

“Hello, Mohinder,” Sylar smiled, leaning against the doorframe.

Mohinder felt like his soul had taken an icy shower. “Molly … go to your room …” he said slowly, praying with all his might that Sylar wasn’t after her, just the List … and Mohinder’s life.

Sylar’s smile widened into a fiendish grin. “On second thought, why doesn’t she stay where she is? I’d hate to break the door to her room if you don’t cooperate with me Mohinder.”

Molly stared at Sylar. “Who are you?” she asked, biting her lip worriedly. “Mohinder, should I go or –?”  

“No, don’t move … please,” Mohinder was trying very hard too keep the suffocating fear out of his voice. “This is … um …”

“Sylar,” Sylar stepped inside and slammed the door with his mind. “My name is Sylar, Molly. Mohinder and I are going to have a little chat, and if he gives me what I want, everything’s going to be fine.”

Mohinder edged away from Sylar towards Molly, who was still sitting on the couch, gazing at Sylar curiously.

“What do you want, Sylar?” Mohinder asked, surprising himself in sounding perfectly calm.

Sylar cocked his head to the side. “What do I want, Mohinder? I want a lot of things: to be special, for the FBI stop chasing me, Peter Petrelli dead, the List, a few things to do with you that I won’t say in front of Molly …” he smirked, lust and blood in his eyes.

Mohinder clenched his fist into the couch and put his arm around Molly. “I’ll rephrase that: what do you want me to do so Molly will … be ok?”

Sylar glanced across the room. “The List is destroyed, isn’t it? But you’ve been working on it, haven’t you?” a chair skidded across the room seemingly of its own accord. Sylar sat down in it. “That’s a good place to start, I suppose.”

Molly’s eyes had widened when the chair shot across the room. “Wow!” she whispered. “That was cool …”

While she was distracted, Mohinder locked eyes with Sylar. “Are you going to …” he mouthed ‘kill me?’

Sylar raised his eyebrows. “I’m not really sure yet. Currently you’re more good to me alive, so don’t dwell on it,” he flicked his hand, and Mohinder was flung toward the computer. Molly gasped, clapping her hands to her mouth.

BANG.

The door was kicked in – Sylar and the chair crashed to the floor – and several black clad figures who looked like SWAT team members – but they weren’t SWAT – stood in the doorway.

“A-Team, get the scientist and the girl! B and C, take Sylar down!” one of them barked.

Sylar telekinetically flung him and his companions out of the door, but the crash of breaking glass told him more were coming through the back.

Mohinder shoved his laptop into its bag and dove to the side as tranquilizer darts zoomed through the room. Molly was already crouched behind the couch – she was white as a sheet. Mohinder hugged her to his chest, she whimpered.

Sylar ducked down beside them, a tinge of … fear in his eyes.

“Who the hell are these people?” Mohinder demanded, feeling his terror escalate: Sylar was scared … that wasn’t good.

“No time!” Sylar hissed, hurling the sofa at the door. “Dammit!” he roared, grabbing Mohinder and Molly and diving out the open window. 

Molly screamed, but they touched down to the ground lightly, like stepping off a stair.

Sylar telekinetically broke into the nearest car, shoved Molly and Mohinder’s laptop in the back, and forced Mohinder into the driver’s seat. “Keep driving until I tell you to stop!” he snapped, locking the doors.

Gunshots – the men were firing at them. Molly squeaked and ducked down onto the floor, covering her head with her arms.

“It’s going to be ok, Molly,” Mohinder said, speeding through a red light at a glance from Sylar. “Don’t worry we’re … we’re going to be ok.”

Sylar smirked, raising his eyebrows. You don’t really believe that, do you? he asked Mohinder with his eyes.

Mohinder shook his head slightly. “Am I going anywhere in particular?” he glared at the cars ahead of them.

“Head out west, aim for California,” Sylar twisted around in his seat – no unmarked vans or strange faux SWAT men in sight …yet.

“Are we really going to California, or are we just going in that general direction?” Mohinder beeped loudly at a cab that cut him off.

“When I know I’ll tell you,” Sylar caught the little girl’s eye. She stared boldly back at him. Fear, anger, confusion, and worry swirled in her brown eyes – so open and innocent. It was jarring – he stared straight ahead again.

“Who are those men? There’s time now, right?” Mohinder swerved around a corner. “I wouldn’t ask if it was just you they were after, but they said ‘the scientist and the girl’ and we aren’t serial-killers on the run from the FBI.”

Molly gasped. “I knew it!” she exclaimed. “You’re the Boogeyman!”

Sylar almost laughed. “Fine, you want to call me that? Doesn’t matter. I remember you: you’re Molly Walker … your father had an ability …” twisted around in his seat and eyed her hungrily. “Are you special?” he hissed.

Mohinder slammed on the brakes. “Leave her alone!” he demanded as cars behind him beeped their disapproval.

“Keep driving!” Sylar snapped.

“I’m not moving this car until you promise to stop taunting her!” Mohinder glared at Sylar. “Play mind games with me! She’s just a little girl!”

KEEP DRIVING!” Sylar roared, pushing the gas with his mind and grabbing the steering wheel.

They continued for a few moments like that – Molly cowering in the back, Mohinder fuming into the driver’s seat, Sylar controlling the car with his thoughts – until Sylar spoke again.

“Fine, I’ll leave her alone. But only if you keep driving, this is a pain to keep up,” Sylar cocked his head to the side.

Mohinder sighed and grabbed the wheel. “Deal,” he said grudgingly, accelerating and heading out of the city.

~*~

They stopped once for gas – Sylar locked them inside, switched license plates with a nearby parked car, and returned from the convenience store with some bottled water and a bag of pretzels. Mohinder didn’t ask where he’d gotten the money, or if he’d paid at all, and concentrated on the road and tried not to think about what would happen when night fell. Would Sylar just make him keep driving? Threatening Molly could only keep him awake so long …

“Take the next exit and find the Motel 8,” Sylar ordered around ten-thirty.

Mohinder glanced in the mirror – Molly was already asleep, using the laptop bag as a pillow – and did as he was told.

They were locked in the car again as Sylar went into the front office and returned with two room cards. “Park over there and wake her up,” Sylar said, getting out once the car had stopped moving and yawning massively.

“Molly?” Mohinder whispered. “Molly, wake up ...”

Molly moaned. “Mommy?” she asked.

Mohinder felt a slight twinge. He was certain that Sylar – with Dale’s ability – had heard. “No, it’s Mohinder, we’ve stopped at a motel for the night.”

She sat up and stretched. “Where are we?” she mumbled.

“Somewhere in Ohio,” Mohinder said, helping her out of the car and grabbing the laptop bag at a look from Sylar.

“When are we going home?” she asked as they walked up the staircase and across the balcony.

Mohinder glanced at Sylar. “I don’t know,” he confessed truthfully. “Try not to think about it, ok?”

Sylar is watching Mohinder curiously, his head cocked to the side in that way of his.

He doesn’t understand caring for someone else like this, Mohinder realized with horror.

Sylar unlocks one of the rooms. “She stays in here. We take the one next door. If she tries to leave, or escape, or come into our room …” Sylar glared meaningfully.

Mohinder glared all of his hatred and revulsion back and crouched down beside Molly. “Molly, stay in here until I get you, ok? If you hear … um … noises, don’t worry, ok?”

Molly nodded, hugged him, and darted inside the room, switching on the lights as she went.

When the door shut, Mohinder faced Sylar. “Is that the last time I’m going to see her?” he demanded softly.

Sylar laughed. “You worry too much, Mohinder. You’re so convinced I’m going to kill you, or her, when there are so many other things I could do instead …” he grabbed Mohinder’s wrist and dragged him into the other room. The lights flickered on without a touch, illuminating a small room with two beds.

The table jumped to the side, and the beds shoved together.

“Oh god …” Mohinder whispered as Sylar kicked off his shoes, tossed his coat to the side, and began to slip the scientist’s clothing off. “No … you won’t … you wouldn’t … even you won’t sink this low …” fear that he’d held back all day swelled up nauseatingly.

Sylar smirked. “Won’t I?” he kissed Mohinder roughly, seeking something to sate his lust. Mohinder wanted to resist, fight, yell, but then he remembered that Molly was next door. I can’t make a sound. I won’t let her die.

Sylar laughed lightly. “You’re so easy to read, Mohinder. Why bother with telepathy when you’re already an open book?” his hands were roaming where Mohinder had never let another man, lips caressing his face horrifically.  

Feverish prayers ran through his head as Sylar tossed him down onto the two beds. Mohinder couldn’t let himself think about what was happening or he knew he’d scream.

Date: 2007-08-09 08:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladywilde80.livejournal.com
Wow, intresting premise. I like this - I really want more! Will there be more? This is so good... more please.

Date: 2007-08-09 08:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aunt-zelda.livejournal.com
Wow, intresting premise.
I thought so ...

I like this - I really want more!
Good! Yay!

Will there be more? This is so good... more please.
Of COURSE there shall be more! Silly people, I would not leave it hanging like that after going through all that trouble of getting them into a car and on the road!

Date: 2007-08-09 08:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladywilde80.livejournal.com
hee hee, you're cute when you're snarky :)

Date: 2007-08-10 03:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aunt-zelda.livejournal.com
Um ... thanks? (Like the Ninth Doctor, huh? *preens* I need an icon that says 'English Snark Turns Me On' that flashes between Nine and Spike ...)

Date: 2007-08-09 08:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] north-ernlights.livejournal.com
Ooohhh, I love it when people write noncon!!!!! It's perfect with Mylar, of course :-P because Mohinder would, of course, never be gay, and never let sylar touch him like that.
Ooohhhhhh, I love this :-P
And I love how you keep Molly in the picture!!!
Ahhhh! So good :D
Please continue, yes?!

Date: 2007-08-10 03:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aunt-zelda.livejournal.com
Um ... what if Mohinder turns out to be bi? Would that be so horrible? ...

and never let sylar touch him like that.
He's HATING Sylar doing this to him, but GABRIEL the Anti-Hero on the other hand ...

Ooohhhhhh, I love this :-P
Thank you!

And I love how you keep Molly in the picture!!!
Molly must stay - this limits the torture Sylar will put Mohinder through because he can just say 'I could take Molly's power if you don't do X' ... and the Mywalker family shall come eventually!

Please continue, yes?!
I NEVER SAID I WOULDN'T! Why is everyone acting like I won't? I plan on a long, long AU series ... possibly of c-quinn Plaude fantasy epic length ...

Date: 2007-08-09 09:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] poemwithnorhyme.livejournal.com
Wow, just..wow..You have some of the best ideas! Makes me wish I would have thought of it first, but, you're writing it much better then I ever could. Wonderful job!

I love your Sylar..but him being afraid of those people, that was what surprised me the most. I can't picture him being afraid of anything..O.o It still worked. I also liked that he refused to look at Molly too long, shows that he does have some feelings. Oh, and that he would force Molly into one room and Mohinder and him into another..Yum, in a sick way, but I like sick..XD

"Mohinder couldn’t let himself think about what was happening or he knew he’d scream." <--that last line, I loved it, really got to me. Perfectly said, just..Ahh, I can't wait for more!

Date: 2007-08-10 03:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aunt-zelda.livejournal.com
Wow, just..wow..You have some of the best ideas! Makes me wish I would have thought of it first, but, you're writing it much better then I ever could. Wonderful job!
Thank you! *blushes* Praise is a lovely thing ... *hums happily all night*

I love your Sylar..
Apparently I write a good Sylar. Perhaps because he's one of my fav characters, and I can be just as sick and twisted as he is!

but him being afraid of those people, that was what surprised me the most. I can't picture him being afraid of anything..O.o It still worked.
Those people ... who exactly are they? *hasn't figured it out yet* Utto ...

I also liked that he refused to look at Molly too long, shows that he does have some feelings.
He can't stand the innocence! Bahahahahah!

Oh, and that he would force Molly into one room and Mohinder and him into another..Yum, in a sick way, but I like sick..XD
How is it sick that Molly's in a separate room? It'd be HORRIBLE if they were all in the same room ... Sylar would force Mohinder to engage in silent-smut (new term, patented) in the shower, or while she was sleeping ... ewww ...
I like sick! Silent-smut is fun ...

that last line, I loved it, really got to me. Perfectly said, just..Ahh, I can't wait for more!
The last line is rather creepy and sad, isn't it? More shall come ... eventually ...

Date: 2007-08-10 10:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] poemwithnorhyme.livejournal.com
Sylar is very twisted..I am as well, but I'm just so much more twisted in my own mind and can't seem to get it down on paper/computer's word pad very well..lol

Who are they, hmm..Well, I'm sure we'll all be shocked once you figure it out. ^_^

Innocence sucks, let's rid the world of it! Yay! O.o

Well, it's not really sick, but I just love how he was like 'let's shove Molly in a separate room so I can get my freak on!' But you're right, it would be sicker if he would have forced Mohinder into it with Molly in the room. *laughs* That sort of makes me laugh..lol. Silent smut! Perfect! I sort of did that in my first fic..Sylar and Mohinder in the shower, Molly sleeping peacefully in the other room, unaware something illegal in some states was going on..Muha..

It was rather creepy and sad, in a gorgeous, magnificent way!

Date: 2007-08-11 02:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aunt-zelda.livejournal.com
Who are they, hmm..Well, I'm sure we'll all be shocked once you figure it out. ^_^
Well, it's not so much of a surprise, actually ... *not good with plot twists*

Innocence sucks, let's rid the world of it! Yay! O.o
No no no ... Molly is there to counter the angst and see through the lies and be used as leverage so Mohinder will engage in silent-smut ... she's a central part!

I just love how he was like 'let's shove Molly in a separate room so I can get my freak on!'
Sylar is like that ... sociopath ...

It was rather creepy and sad, in a gorgeous, magnificent way!
I think that's what I was going for. Sort of. Part 2 isn't looking too good ...

Date: 2007-08-09 09:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oscargirl08.livejournal.com
You got them in my neck of the woods! OH-IO!!!! Anyhow, I like how you began this...Mohinder is just so clueless.

Date: 2007-08-10 04:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aunt-zelda.livejournal.com
I don't believe I've ever been to Ohio. Sorry ... I just speculated how far they would get if they drove for a certain amount of time ...

Anyhow, I like how you began this...Mohinder is just so clueless.
You mean how he assumes Sylar's going to take the List and kill him, not smut it up in motel rooms? Yeah, silly guy ...

Date: 2007-08-09 09:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ivy-b.livejournal.com
This was great. Mysterious bad guys, action, lots of TK usage and using Molly as leverage against Mohinder. Oh and non-con (which is sick to like, I know) so, so far so good. Great premise, I loved Sylar's general bad-assedness.

Two things though:

*"“I’ll rephrase that: what do you want me to do so Molly will … be ok?”- you've put what I'm guessing is Mohinder's line in the same paragraph that Sylar spoke. So that kinda confused me a bit.

*"even you won’t sink this low …”

" “Wouldn’t I?”

I'm no English teacher (and an Israeli to boot) but if you use "wouldn't" in the answer, shouldn't you use "wouldn't" instead of "won't" in the question?


Now that I'm done nit picking, I loved the Mohinder-Sylar dialogue, it rang true and that last bit between them was pretty hot.

Date: 2007-08-10 03:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aunt-zelda.livejournal.com
Fixed stuff. Thanks! (The paragraph was odd, I don't KNOW how that one happened ...) On a side note, are you IN Israel or just FROM there? If you're there, are you ok? I hear scary stories on NPR ...

I loved the Mohinder-Sylar dialogue, it rang true and that last bit between them was pretty hot.
Hot and wrong! My favorite bit of their exchanges is when Mohinder slams on the brakes and he and Sylar turn into teenage girls. Also, I love how they can read sentences in each other's eyes. Foreshadowing, that ...

This was great.
Thank you!

Mysterious bad guys, action, lots of TK usage and using Molly as leverage against Mohinder.
Yes, that is a summary of this series ... sounds like a bad action flick when you put it like that ...

Oh and non-con (which is sick to like, I know)
Real life = EVIL AND NASTY. With Mylar, it's bearable. Particularly since Sylar will become Gabriel the Anti-Hero and be nicer and the non-con will vanish over time, so ...

Great premise, I loved Sylar's general bad-assedness.
This story will be interesting ... and yes, Sylar is BADASS! I mean, long dark coats and some of the best lines and TK and he's so HOT ... anti-hero in the making!

Date: 2007-08-10 09:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ivy-b.livejournal.com
Yes, the scene with Mohinder slamming on the breaks is pretty funny- I like it when Mohinder shows backbone. And just because it SOUNDS like a bad action flick, doesn't mean it IS one.

Yes, born and raised (and living) in Israel. What scary stuff? *looks around* I wonder what they've been telling you, I can't remember anything bad happening recently.

Date: 2007-08-10 05:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aunt-zelda.livejournal.com
Yes, the scene with Mohinder slamming on the breaks is pretty funny- I like it when Mohinder shows backbone.
I have fun with getting them to bicker. More of that on the way ...

And just because it SOUNDS like a bad action flick, doesn't mean it IS one.
Good! (Well, there aren't any leather-clad, large chested women, so not EXACTLY a bad action flick ... maybe a new kind of action flick!)

Yes, born and raised (and living) in Israel.
Wow. Is it nice there? I guess it must be, for people to be fighting about it all the time ... that's something I've never really understood, it's it really hot and sandy there? *feels silly*
Does Heroes broadcast there, or do you watch episodes online? I do both, because NBC comes in fuzzy here sometimes ...

Date: 2007-08-11 04:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ivy-b.livejournal.com
Oh I love Mohinder and Sylar bickering- yay!

Nice? Sure, we've got major cities with the usual, shopping malls and beaches- though not in Jerusalem I'm afraid :( . We've got greener areas up north (colder) and more "desert" like areas down south. Hot? Well it is summer, though thankfully Jerusalem is surrounded by mountains, so it cools down in the evening and isn't humid. But if you go down to Eilat in the summer? Damn, it's unbearable!

Heroes does broadcast here (I don't think they've finished the first season) but it's not on my cable network, it's on the competing one. So my brother and I watch online.
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Date: 2007-08-10 04:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aunt-zelda.livejournal.com
I can't wait for more!
More shall come ... eventually ... I've got a play and a birthday next week! *runs and hides*

Date: 2007-08-10 04:09 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
This was good. The action sequences were awesome, especially the telekinetic car chase. That's something I wish I could see...

Date: 2007-08-10 04:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aunt-zelda.livejournal.com
I'm always worried I won't do action very well. But with TK things are made easier ...

This was good.
Thank you!

especially the telekinetic car chase. That's something I wish I could see...
I love that bit, where Mohinder and Sylar bicker like teenage girls ... and you never know, eventually we'll probably get something like that on the show. Sylar is on the run and has TK, it's pretty likely ...
(Do I know you by any chance? Anonymous posts make me wonder ...)

Date: 2007-08-10 05:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jessieflower.livejournal.com
This was great! I thought Mohinder was very in-character, caring about Molly before himself. I loved it.

I can't wait for another chapter.

Date: 2007-08-10 05:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aunt-zelda.livejournal.com
This was great! I thought Mohinder was very in-character, caring about Molly before himself. I loved it.
Thank you! Sometimes I worry that I won't do Mohinder right ... Sylar I can do (apparently very well) but Mohinder is a challenge. And I keep having to remind myself that Molly isn't fourteen - she's ten ...

I can't wait for another chapter.
Coming soon!

(Are you new? Welcome!)

Date: 2007-08-10 09:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aunt-zelda.livejournal.com
That's one sweet icon ya got there. (I have three icons, I'm working on building up now that I agreed to have adds on my pages and can get 15 ...)

Date: 2007-08-10 10:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jessieflower.livejournal.com
Thanks! Actually I made it. If you're looking for heroes icons it is my duty to shamelessly pimp my own icon community: [livejournal.com profile] jessiesgarden. I've got loads of Heroes icons there.
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Date: 2007-08-10 09:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aunt-zelda.livejournal.com
This very intriguing, can't wait to read more!
More on the way ... possibly tonight/tomorrow morning!

I love how he is using his powers for various things like moving the chair and driving the car. It's awesome!
He's so badass ...

How creepy (and I'm a sick and twisted fan of the creepy), I loved it.
Sylar IS creepy ... for now. Eventually (this is planned out as a relatively long series) he becomes Gabriel the Anti-Hero (no mind wipe!) and they all return to NYC, but not for a VERY long time ...

Date: 2007-08-10 10:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] holy-cockroach.livejournal.com
<3 <3 <3

Awesome fic. I love how you had Molly go on the trip with them! Yay! But now Sylar has an extra advantage over Mohinder, cuz Mohinder's all protective...

Your Mohinder and Sylar interaction felt very in character, good job.

*goes back to read it again*

I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Date: 2007-08-11 02:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aunt-zelda.livejournal.com
Awww, thanks! *beams*

Awesome fic. I love how you had Molly go on the trip with them! Yay! But now Sylar has an extra advantage over Mohinder, cuz Mohinder's all protective...
Sylar's a clever guy, isn't he? And Molly coming along is great. She's wise beyond her years, that girl.

Your Mohinder and Sylar interaction felt very in character, good job.
Thanks! I always worry about Mohinder, Sylar's usually easy ...

*goes back to read it again*
Awww, you flatter! *blushes*

I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Tonight!

Date: 2008-05-30 05:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] teecub.livejournal.com
Okay, where the heck did this come from?! Maaaaan, I cannot believe that I missed out on this story. Mmmm! Okay. Time to start reviewing. (I’m about twelve lines down and squealing already.)

(Molly’s eyes had widened when the chair shot across the room. “Wow!” she whispered. “That was cool …”) Ohhh, the poor little girl! She has no idea…

(While she was distracted, Mohinder locked eyes with Sylar. “Are you going to …” he mouthed ‘kill me?’) That was pretty smart. I just wanted to hug him to death there. He’s being so strong for his little girl!!

(“Who the hell are these people?” Mohinder demanded, feeling his terror escalate: Sylar was scared … that wasn’t good.) Ee! When the evil murderer starts showing fear… yeah, scream and run for the hills!!

(“It’s going to be ok, Molly,” Mohinder said, speeding through a red light at a glance from Sylar. “Don’t worry we’re … we’re going to be ok.”) Awww! Again, he’s trying so hard even when faced with all of that. Sylar’s look afterwards, too, made me laugh. Ee, he’s so pessimistic there!

(“When I know I’ll tell you,” Sylar caught the little girl’s eye. She stared boldly back at him. Fear, anger, confusion, and worry swirled in her brown eyes ? so open and innocent. It was jarring ? he stared straight ahead again. ) Oh yeah! Molly-induced guilt trip!!

(“Who are those men? There’s time now, right?” Mohinder swerved around a corner. “I wouldn’t ask if it was just you they were after, but they said ‘the scientist and the girl’ and we aren’t serial-killers on the run from the FBI.”) *Facepalms* Okay. This I could understand, and yes he should be upset about Sylar being all I-want-to-steal-your-supposed-ability on Molly, but slamming the breaks? Such a Mohinder thing to do while being chased. LOVED IT!

(Mohinder glanced in the mirror ? Molly was already asleep, using the laptop bag as a pillow ? and did as he was told. ) Ohhh, the poor little mite!!

(When the door shut, Mohinder faced Sylar. “Is that the last time I’m going to see her?” he demanded softly. ) And poor Mohinder! I felt so bad for him there, being so tough…

(Feverish prayers ran through his head as Sylar tossed him down onto the two beds. Mohinder couldn’t let himself think about what was happening or he knew he’d scream.) Eeeeeep!!! Again, poor Mohinder! Expecting to get killed, getting possibly worse-than-killed instead - yikes!! This was an amazing chapter. Mmmmm… Must go see if there is more…

Date: 2008-05-30 10:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aunt-zelda.livejournal.com
(Whoa, I wrote this last summer ... there's only three parts, I'm afraid ... however did you find it?)
Thank you for falling in love with it! Lots of people love this series ... they were forever yelling at me to finish it, but then school started again and the new series started and I got sucked into DW and ... *sigh*

That was pretty smart. I just wanted to hug him to death there. He’s being so strong for his little girl!!
I love Mohinder-the-good-daddy. I also love love LOVE Mywalker, because Molly-has-two-daddies reminds me of my own childhood, so this is me semi-Mary-Sue-ing ... except not.

Ee! When the evil murderer starts showing fear… yeah, scream and run for the hills!!
Yes indeedy!

Awww! Again, he’s trying so hard even when faced with all of that. Sylar’s look afterwards, too, made me laugh. Ee, he’s so pessimistic there!
*grinz* Apparently I'm good with dialog ... I'm good with people. Fight scenes? Not so much ...

Oh yeah! Molly-induced guilt trip!!
*GRINZ* That's why I love throwing Molly into the Mylar mix. "You killed my father and liiiiiiiiied to me!" can only go so far without getting repetetive, with Molly you can go at it from so many angles ...

*Facepalms* Okay. This I could understand, and yes he should be upset about Sylar being all I-want-to-steal-your-supposed-ability on Molly, but slamming the breaks? Such a Mohinder thing to do while being chased. LOVED IT!
I am insanely proud of that bit. *huggles it*

Ohhh, the poor little mite!!
Poor Molly ... I use her so much in my fics ... remember the Rapid-Fire Challenge?

And poor Mohinder! I felt so bad for him there, being so tough…
He's got SO MUCH going on in that pretty head of his ... *huggles him some more* Poor boy ...

Eeeeeep!!! Again, poor Mohinder! Expecting to get killed, getting possibly worse-than-killed instead - yikes!!
Oh yeah, I still feel bad about putting him through that ...

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