Use What God Gave You (Mylar/Eclaire Fic)
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aunt_zeldaTitle: Use What God Gave You
Rating: R for swears, violence, and lewd suggestions
Characters: Sylar, Mohinder, and Molly. Noah, Claire, and Elle (teams of three)
Genre: Speculative Volume III
Pairings: Mylar and Eclaire (please squint)
Word Count: 1,727
Warnings: Watch Heroes, Seasons 1 AND 2. Otherwise, it’s not safe here for you here.
Disclaimer: If any of us owned Heroes, Claude would not have left.
Summary: Mayhem at the Company! Femmeslash? Perhaps!
My Thoughts: I know I haven’t posted any slash in forever and I haven’t been reading fics but I was at a funeral last week and tomorrow/today play rehearsals begin. This was mostly written between nine-in-the-afternoon and one-in-the-morning, so bear with my mistakes and please point them out, I had no time for a beta! (Just you wait, aussievamp …)
THIS IS A ONE-SHOT!
Femmeslash peppered throughout … if you’re lucky I’ll find a way to include Claire and Elle’s Motel-Scene in some other fic …
(I’m posting a lot more stuff tonight: prepare to be BOMBARDED with bad Doctor/Master fanfiction!)
“If memory serves, that’s the alarm that sounds when all the high-security prisoners have been set free.” Noah Bennet was looking up at the blinking red light on the ceiling with mild interest, as if the shrill siren was a rerun of a favorite TV show.
“High-security prisoners?” Elle asked, sounding a bit nervous. “Like … like all of them?”
Noah nodded, standing up and stretching. “Going to do something about it, Elle?”
She faltered. “I … uh …” she yanked the door open and looked down the hallway warily. “Come with me!” she ordered, her old confidence trickling back.
Noah smiled grimly and followed, pocketing his bouncy-ball.
~*~
Molly whimpered. Her arm had been broken when that … woman (in the flickering light of the hallway Mohinder had had the wild thought it was Kali, the Destroyer) had thrown them into a wall. Actually, she’d thrown them into several walls, which was why the hallway was so trashed. Miraculously, Mohinder had only received a severe knock on the head (but no concussion as far as he could tell) and bruises and cuts, even after shielding Molly’s body when the ceiling caved. After that two small, shrieking things had distracted the woman from Mohinder and Molly and no one had bothered them since.
“Molly …” he whispered. “Can you find that woman who threw us around?”
“I … I think so …” she squeaked. There was a long, tense pause, then she breathed a sigh of relief. “It’s ok, she’s gone, those … those two monsters killed her … eww, it’s really gross …”
Mohinder held back a gulp. “And … what happened to the two monsters?”
Molly took a deep breath. “Um … they’re dead too … wait … oh no, Mohinder!”
Mohinder hugged her tighter. “What is it?” he asked. What now?
“He’s here! The Boo–” she stopped abruptly.
Mohinder heard footsteps. A cold, sinking feeling spread down through his beaten, tense body.
Suddenly the chunks of ceiling were yanked away and Mohinder was torn from Molly’s side and hurled through the air. He landed, hard, on what remained of the floor in front of a pair of dusty black shoes.
“Mohinder Suresh …” a very familiar voice drawled.
~*~
“Daddy!”
Bob Bishop lay on the floor of his office, sightless eyes staring up through his blood-stained glasses.
Elle knelt down on the floor and wrapped her arms around herself. “No … no no no no no …” she moaned, rocking back and forth.
Noah was busy logging into Bob’s computer and scanning the security footage. “Shit …” he muttered, watching the destructing and mayhem that was taking over the facility. He hastily began sending all the Company’s files to various e-mail addresses he’d invented during his time with Hana.
“Sylar …”
Noah looked up. Elle was standing up now, a terrifying light in her eyes. “Sylar did this. It had to have been. He’s here. I’m gonna find him and make him scream.”
As tempting as the idea of Elle and Sylar battling it out was – it would distract both long enough to let Noah escape – Noah was still faced with a complex full of violent and insane ‘specials,’ many of whom had personal vendettas against Noah himself. He needed protection.
It was times like these that he missed Claude.
“Elle, there’ll be time for that after we’ve gotten everyone out of here. This place is a warzone and we need to preserve what little is left.” he hit ‘send’ one last time.
“You’re not the boss of me!” Elle snapped, sparks dancing from her fingertips.
Noah glanced pointedly at Bob’s body, snatched a gun from the drawer, and loaded it. “I’ve just been promoted.”
~*~
Mohinder slowly pushed himself up onto his knees, tilting his head up to look death in the face.
Sylar had changed since he’d taken Mohinder, Molly, and Maya hostage a month ago. He was wearing a knee-length black jacket, there was a new scar slicing across his right eyebrow, and his hands were dripping blood.
Behind Mohinder, Molly shrank back in the rubble and gave a small squeak.
Sylar was looking over Mohinder appraisingly, then glanced over at Molly.
“I suppose you want to bring the girl along?”
Mohinder gaped at him. “What?”
Sylar stalked over to Molly who recoiled at once. “Please don’t!” she begged, tears brimming in her eyes
“Leave her alone!” Mohinder roared, launching himself at Sylar, only to find himself suspended in the air by an invisible force.
Sylar turned to the cowering Molly. “I’m not going to hurt you, little one …” he said in what he probably intended to be a kind voice, seizing Molly’s broken arm with his bloody hand.
~*~
“You know how daddy always said if you cooperated with us, the Company wouldn’t go after Claire?”
Elle and Noah were creeping along a hallway towards the stairs. Noah glanced at Elle. “Yeah, and …?”
Elle looked down at her feet. “Daddy was a liar.”
Noah seized Elle and slammed her into the wall. “Claire is in this building?!” he roared silently (a difficult skill to master.)
Elle nodded. “Daddy kept her waaaaaay down in the basement so you’d never find her. We only nabbed her two days ago, the experiments haven’t been so bad … they were supposed to step up tomorrow …” her voice trailed off pathetically.
Noah glared and let go of Elle. “Take me to her.”
Elle nodded eagerly. “Sure thing, boss!” she trilled, zapping a large, burly man with glowing hands who’d suddenly appeared through a doorway.
~*~
Molly rubbed her newly-healed arm, staring up at Sylar. “You …”
“You’re welcome,” Sylar said, ‘letting’ Mohinder go and peering down a corridor.
Molly ran over to Mohinder, who hugged her tightly.
Sylar eyed them distastefully. “Come on, doctor … and keep that GPS close. If we loose her I’m not turning back.”
Mohinder finally found his voice. “Why are you … helping us?”
Sylar whirled on Mohinder, once again resembling the terrifying monster Mohinder was used to. Molly shrank back in alarm.
“You aren’t meant to die in a place like this, doctor. Unless you want to wait around for some psychotic cretin to finish you off, I suggest you come with me.”
Mohinder wasn’t satisfied. “Why should I trust you?”
Sylar rolled his eyes. “I haven’t killed you yet, have I?” and with that he turned on his heel and began to stride (cautiously) down the next corridor.
“Mohinder,” Molly gulped. “He’s the only one who can protect us from the other monsters …”
Mohinder stood up and took Molly’s hand. “You’re right … but that doesn’t mean I trust him.”
Mohinder reluctantly hurried after Sylar, Molly jogging to keep up.
~*~
Elle had shocked the elevator back online and was now melting the door to Claire’s cell.
“Hurry …” Noah glanced from side to side. They’d been making an awful lot of noise and hadn’t encountered anyone yet, but, then again, he suspected everyone had moved up from these lower levels. Or he hoped so.
CLANG.
“There we go!” Elle kicked door in and stepped inside. “Hey there, Claire-bear …”
“What’re you doing here?” snapped Claire’s voice.
Noah finished checking around and ran inside.
“Dad?!” Claire raced forward and hugged him. “Oh god, dad … they …” she burst into tears.
“It’s going to be ok, Claire-bear,” Noah patted her head. Elle stared at them quizzically. “Someone let all the high-security prisoners free, though, this place is a mess, we’ve got to get out of here fast.”
Claire looked over his shoulder at Elle. “Is that why you’re with her?” she spat.
Noah drew out of his embrace with his daughter, planting his hands on her shoulders. “Elle is as much a victim as you are. And she recognizes that I’m the most senior member of the Company left.” he turned to Elle. “Should we chance the elevator again or take the stairs?”
Elle’s mouth twisted indecisively. “Stairs this time …”
Noah nodded and glanced at his daughter. “Up for a climb?”
Claire crossed her arms and followed him out into the hallway, shooting Elle a nasty look as she passed.
Elle smiled sweetly in return.
~*~
Mohinder squeezed Molly’s hand, wondering if he could somehow manage to distract Sylar long enough to crash the Nissan Rouge they were currently speeding in. It was a terrible thing to ponder but now that he was out of the ‘choose the devil you know over the devil you don’t’ situation he and Sylar were back at square one. If there had ever been a square one with him and Sylar.
“Do you have a plan, or are you just making this up as you go along?” Mohinder asked tentatively.
“I always have a plan.” Sylar snapped from the driver’s seat, passing a mini-cooper that was obeying the speed limit. “1: take down the Company. 2: find you. 3: bring you with me on another road trip. 4: find a motel.”
Mohinder blinked, confused. “What’s the motel got to do with anything?”
Sylar laughed. “I’d rather not discuss that in front of the little one, doctor.”
Mohinder felt like he’d been doused in ice water.
~*~
Claire sat in the back of her father’s car and tried to process it all. Being captured, spending almost three days in a cell, being rescued by her father, and now, traveling with a sadist who – while they were climbing over hunks of rubble and bodies on the staircase – had been checking out Claire’s ass.
The last bit was definitely the most disturbing, because Claire wasn’t all that sure she minded. Well, she minded the bit about Elle being a murdering freak, but she didn’t mind the fact that Elle was, well, a girl.
A rather attractive girl.
Claire shook her head. No. She was not going to think like that! Think about boys: Brody, Zach, West … rapist, gay, big mistake.
Claire squeezed her eyes shut and concentrated on how she’d felt when she and West had been kissing on the couch. Did that count, though? Really, deep down, she’d been thinking about May, the captain of the cheerleading squad …
“Something wrong, Claire-bear?”
Claire’s eyes snapped open. Elle was looking at her with forced-concern barely masking gleeful-hope.
“Don’t call me ‘Claire-bear.’” she growled, glaring at the ever-sunny Elle.
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Date: 2008-02-25 08:47 am (UTC)“I always have a plan.” Sylar snapped from the driver’s seat, passing a mini-cooper that was obeying the speed limit. “1: take down the Company. 2: find you. 3: bring you with me on another road trip. 4: find a motel.”
Mohinder blinked, confused. “What’s the motel got to do with anything?”
Sylar laughed. “I’d rather not discuss that in front of the little one, doctor.”
Mohinder felt like he’d been doused in ice water.
HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I know this is a one shot so I'll resist the urge to ask for another chapter on what happened at the motel XD!!!
YAY I loved this! You nailed all the characters!
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Date: 2008-02-25 04:49 pm (UTC)... whoa. Glad to, uh, make you explode? *is concerned* I can't kill the ledgendary Mabes! *worried*
I know this is a one shot so I'll resist the urge to ask for another chapter on what happened at the motel XD!!!
I haven't got a PLAN for the Mylar bit, but I do have a plan for the Elle/Claire scene at the motel ... *grinz*
YAY I loved this! You nailed all the characters!
Whoa! Thank you! The last bits were written when I was REALLY DAMN TIRED and half unconcious, I was worried ...
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Date: 2008-02-25 09:28 pm (UTC)*explodes*
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Date: 2008-02-26 01:30 am (UTC)http://aunt-zelda.livejournal.com/17381.html - The Quiet Life: Part 1
http://aunt-zelda.livejournal.com/17598.html - The Quiet Life: Part 2
http://aunt-zelda.livejournal.com/21290.html - The Quiet Life: Part 3
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Date: 2008-02-25 12:08 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-02-25 04:59 pm (UTC)Really? *SQUEE*
I'm resisting to ask for a sequel.
Oh dear ... I really haven't the time!
Loved it.
*blushes and beams*
Especially the last bit with Claire. Heh.
I might post the Elle/Claire motel scene someday ...
(Have we 'met' before? I don't recognize you ... why is your icon so familiar to me?)
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Date: 2008-02-25 07:24 pm (UTC)You're icon is familiar to me too. Have you written fics before? Because if you have written anything with Elle I would have probably read it.
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Date: 2008-02-26 12:29 am (UTC)Oh yes! I've done the set-up ... now I have to get them into the same bed ... a daunting task for one a novice such as myself ...
I got the icon from this: http://violet-anchovy.livejournal.com/15106.html
Yeah, I've posted quite a lot of fics and stuff, actually ... not much with Elle, though ... I used to hate her, but now I've decided she's either a lesbian or a slasher or both, plus her fun lines got to me.
On the subject of YOUR icons: I wanna say ... Emma Claufield? The girl who played Anya in Buffy?
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Date: 2008-02-26 08:29 am (UTC)Well I loved Elle from the beginning, but then I'm biased.
What's a slasher?
And nope. That's Kristen Bell (who plays Elle) in Veronica Mars (as Veronica Mars). Hence why I was biased towards Elle, I loved VM. Although she does look a bit like Emma in them. Huh.
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Date: 2008-02-27 05:48 am (UTC)*giggles mischiviously* Mine is an evil laugh ...
What's a slasher?
What we are. A person who writes, reads about, adores pretty menfolk doing it in fanfiction. Or pretty womenfolk.
And nope. That's Kristen Bell (who plays Elle) in Veronica Mars (as Veronica Mars). Hence why I was biased towards Elle, I loved VM.
I really need to SEE Veronica Mars, don't I?
Although she does look a bit like Emma in them. Huh.
Weird ...
(About THAT icon: hee, ZQ is so cute ... and hot ... and way too touchy with Kristen Bell, I don't CARE if they grew up together!)
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Date: 2008-02-27 10:10 am (UTC)ZQ is too cute for words. And too hot for words. Especially when he is touchy with Kristen Bell. Heh. Hayden is that touchy with her too, she's like a Heroes cast member magnet. ^^
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Date: 2008-02-25 12:43 pm (UTC)I loved this:
"traveling with a sadist who – while they were climbing over hunks of rubble and bodies on the staircase – had been checking out Claire’s ass.
The last bit was definitely the most disturbing, because Claire wasn’t all that sure she minded."
I also love Sylar going after The Company and saving Mohinder (and Molly by proxy). The conversation in the car was great. Especially this:
"“I always have a plan.” Sylar snapped from the driver’s seat, passing a mini-cooper that was obeying the speed limit. “1: take down the Company. 2: find you. 3: bring you with me on another road trip. 4: find a motel.”
Mohinder blinked, confused. “What’s the motel got to do with anything?”
Sylar laughed. “I’d rather not discuss that in front of the little one, doctor.”"
A one shot eh? Any chance you could fit that Mohinder/Sylar motel room scene into another fic? :^)
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Date: 2008-02-25 05:01 pm (UTC)Sorry to disapoint ...
this is quite good.
Ooo, thanks!
I loved this:
Yeah, I seem to write angsty teens questioning their sexuality quite well ... and I'm NOT gay OR bi! *cries*
I also love Sylar going after The Company and saving Mohinder (and Molly by proxy). The conversation in the car was great. Especially this:
Hee, thanks! Personally I felt that the last bit of Mylar was a little weak but that's just me ...
A one shot eh? Any chance you could fit that Mohinder/Sylar motel room scene into another fic? :^)
No, I'm sorry ... how about the Elle/Claire motel scene?
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Date: 2008-02-25 03:41 pm (UTC)You did Claire and Bennet in perfect characterization of their season 2 characters (ie., I hated them. Jerks.). I don't usually love Elle, but I liked her a lot here, and thought she was in character with what we saw in Cuationary Tales and Powerless. And I found myself thinking, "Elle is way too awesome for Claire." I really liked the little plot that Bob experimented on Claire anyway. That was very smart, and exactly what Bob would do. That was brilliant. It's weird; I trust Sylar to keep his word more than Bob.
Too bad this is a one-shot. A Sylar/Mohinder/Molly roadtrip would be a really fantastic idea for a story. You should do it! :-)
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Date: 2008-02-25 05:05 pm (UTC)Hee, thanks!
I loved Sylar with Molly ("said in what he probably intended to be a kind voice"---hah!).
*sporfles*
I also loved thte Mylar. The four-step plan was incredible and perfect and I couldn't love it more.
That was me being half-concious and desperate to post this. Glad it worked out so well!
You did Claire and Bennet in perfect characterization of their season 2 characters (ie., I hated them. Jerks.).
Oh dear! Yeah, they weren't that nice in S2 ... Noah was going craaaaaazy and trusting MOHINDER on SPY MISSIONS *shakes head* and Claire was dating a dangerous stalker-boy and being overall stupid.
I don't usually love Elle, but I liked her a lot here
Ditto! She usually annoys me ...
and thought she was in character with what we saw in Cuationary Tales and Powerless.
Thank you! I've never really written Elle and I'm glad this worked out ...
And I found myself thinking, "Elle is way too awesome for Claire."
*sporfles* 'Fraid I can't deter from my course ...
I really liked the little plot that Bob experimented on Claire anyway. That was very smart, and exactly what Bob would do. That was brilliant. It's weird; I trust Sylar to keep his word more than Bob.
That's because Sylar is a psychopath and Bob is NOT!
Too bad this is a one-shot. A Sylar/Mohinder/Molly roadtrip would be a really fantastic idea for a story. You should do it! :-)
I can't ... wish I could ... I'm gonna write the Elle/Claire motel scene, though ... *headdesk*
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Date: 2008-02-25 08:31 pm (UTC)The plot itself rocked as well! I love the thought! Ohhh, more ^_^
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Date: 2008-02-26 01:24 am (UTC)The 'Claire is a lesbian' theory has WAY TO MUCH FODDER. Seriously ...
But, omg, ECLAIRE! *hops up and down in a frenzy* I LOVE THEM! They are my second favorite pairing of this show, omg, *squee* You just made my day! *hugs and loves tons and tons*
*reels* Lucky for you I spent all this afternoon being hugged and lifted off my FEET, collapsing, fake-snoring, and dancing around with several young giggly girls whilst waving my arms. Yes, that's right: PLAY PRACTICE BEGAN TODAY. *SQUEE* I am SO HAPPY! I'm glad I made you hop up and down in a frenzy and squee and huggle and such ... *staggering*
The plot itself rocked as well! I love the thought! Ohhh, more ^_^
More Eclaire ... I have a motel-scene in mind ...
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Date: 2008-02-25 11:32 pm (UTC)WHOA... Mohinder and Molly, the little one hurt and Mohinder trying so hard to keep her safe... Then his being torn away and dropped right at Sylar's feet! ACK! <3
"I've just been promoted." Man... that guy reaaaally is a piece of work. Boy do you have him pegged here!
Okay, I'm not sure which of the next two bits I love more - Elle calling Bennet boss or Sylar telling Mohinder he wasn't meant to die there. Oo, I know! Sylar telling Mohinder not to lose his GPS because they weren't going to turn back! ... what? It doesn't really matter that this wasn't in my list, it was still the best!
Okay, then Elle smiles sweetly at Clair's hate and OMG to Sylar's list. Yeah, okay, best not to discuss that near Molly's ears. Why does he need a motel indeed!
Whoa. And Claire just may be hot for Elle! That would be one interesting relationship o.O
I LOVED THIS! <3
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Date: 2008-02-26 01:40 am (UTC)... I love that bouncy ball. He's gonna kill someone with it! That or a coffee-cup ...
WHOA... Mohinder and Molly, the little one hurt and Mohinder trying so hard to keep her safe... Then his being torn away and dropped right at Sylar's feet! ACK! <3
Oh, we all just love having Mohinder on his knees in front of Sylar ...
"I've just been promoted." Man... that guy reaaaally is a piece of work. Boy do you have him pegged here!
Thank you! I worry sometimes about characterization but apparently in this I did 'fantastic!'
Okay, I'm not sure which of the next two bits I love more - Elle calling Bennet boss or Sylar telling Mohinder he wasn't meant to die there. Oo, I know! Sylar telling Mohinder not to lose his GPS because they weren't going to turn back!
*sporfles* I had far too much fun with this ...
Okay, then Elle smiles sweetly at Clair's hate and OMG to Sylar's list.
Heeeheheheheheheh! I lurve being funny!
Yeah, okay, best not to discuss that near Molly's ears. Why does he need a motel indeed!
Mohinder is so daft ...
Whoa. And Claire just may be hot for Elle! That would be one interesting relationship o.O
Oh YEAH ... I find it suspiciously easy writing Claire as a questioning lesbian ...
I LOVED THIS! <3
THANK YOU! <3
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Date: 2008-02-25 11:56 pm (UTC)The thing I like best about this piece though, was that you had little editorial comments throughout, like "“Claire is in this building?!” he roared silently (a difficult skill to master.)" It's kind of like getting a glimpse of costume's zipper in a campy monster movie. ^_^
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Date: 2008-02-26 12:58 am (UTC)Hee, glad to amuse!
The thing I like best about this piece though, was that you had little editorial comments throughout, like "“Claire is in this building?!” he roared silently (a difficult skill to master.)" It's kind of like getting a glimpse of costume's zipper in a campy monster movie. ^_^
*sporfles* I am sometimes funny like that ...
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Date: 2008-02-26 02:44 am (UTC)I loved this fic. The tension was really good and I love the way in which you wrote the characters and their interactions with one another. You did a really wonderful job with this.
<3
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Date: 2008-02-27 04:57 am (UTC)*blushes and beams*
I loved this fic. The tension was really good and I love the way in which you wrote the characters and their interactions with one another. You did a really wonderful job with this.
<3
*GRINZ* Thank you so very much! Apparently I did a really good job with characterization and I'm pleased that YOU of all people thought I did too!
You have made ME a very happy girl! (Btw, you like Eclaire? I plan on writing the bonus motel scene for those two ...)
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Date: 2008-02-27 05:14 am (UTC)And I would fall down dead at your feet to read such a scene!!!
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Date: 2008-02-27 06:44 am (UTC)I'm falling for it ... well, really anything with Claire because I find it horrifically easy to identify with
And I would fall down dead at your feet to read such a scene!!!
Please don't fall DEAD DEAD or everyone ELSE will kill me for killing YOU, the Mylar goddess!
You wouldn't happen to have any linkies of Eclaire smut, or ANY femmeslash smut, come to think of it? I need teachers ...
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Date: 2008-02-29 03:24 am (UTC)This is a masterlist of Elle x Claire fics.
http://community.livejournal.com/elle_claire/3981.html#cutid1
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Date: 2008-02-29 05:44 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-02-27 05:04 am (UTC)*GRINZ* Thank you! Apparently I did rather well on this fic ...
Also, he was kind of sweet to Molly.. in a Sylarey way.
He killed her parents and wants to get into her adoptive-father's pants. Can you blame him for TRYING to be 'nice' to her?
LOOOVED it.
*blushes and beams*
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Date: 2008-02-26 05:27 pm (UTC)go take a nap for chissake.
also, here's a story that someone wrote for me. the creepy guy. for some reason i like to get these, building a case against him:
It was a dark cold winter night, and we walk down the street to the sub-station.
"Will this really work?" you ask.
"Yes it will" I say.
With that I throw a chain up at the transformer. It explodes. The whole area gose dark.
"Its time. Lets start." I say taking your hand.
We walk up to the first house and enter. We can hear two people looking for touches and candles. Its a man and a woman.
"Go my pretty. Find you first kill of the night"
"Thank you" you whisper into my ear
You go off sneakng along. I move away from you looking for my kill.
I hear a stumble and then a crash. You have found you first kill of the night.
I continue on. I find my kill. Its a middle aged woman. She is flashing a tourch around. I sneak up and slit her throat.
"Babes. Are you done?" I ask.
"OH yes. I got him real good" you reply glefuly.
I pick up the womans leg and drag her to where you are.
"Looks like you had fun with this one." I say looking at the disembould courps
"Yeah. I did. Know I'm getting horny"
"Wait up. we can start that later. First we have a few more house visits to make. Lets go."
We leve. Moving quickly, we move to the next house and sloughter the whole family. We carry on like this for five house. On the sixth we have our ball.
"Looks like we can have some fun hear." you say to me licking blood off my face.
I turn my head and kiss you deeply.
"This will be our last house." I say taking your hand and walking upto the frount door.
We walk into the house and find eight couples fucking in the dark.
"Shall we join them?" I ask
YEAHHHH??? scary eh?
anyway. call me so i can lecture you about writing too much.
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Date: 2008-02-27 05:01 am (UTC)Yes I sleep! Quite a lot ... just not the same hours as others.
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Date: 2008-02-29 04:24 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-03-01 01:24 am (UTC)Wow! Thank you very much!
loved loved loved it.
That seems to be the general mood ...
Especially the part about "hotel room" XD I lol'd for like, an hour XD!!!!
Hee, personally I like the bits with Noah/Mr. Bennet/Mr. Butler/HRG ...
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Date: 2008-02-29 10:56 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-03-01 01:25 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-03-01 10:16 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-03-02 04:11 pm (UTC)Erm, next ... might have to wait a while ... new class starting, and rehersals stepping up, and I'm still like two weeks behind on Mylar ...
Yes, femmeslash, I'm getting better at it ... there's a bonus Eclaire motel scene coming up soon I've got STARTED ...
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Date: 2008-03-03 11:20 pm (UTC)lol. busy busy busy. same here. *le sigh* School...