Critic got a great ending, let him go. Indeed. And if he couldn't be let go (let's face it, view counts and all) why not bring him back in a way that didn't read like a psychotic breakdown where a hallucination bullied Doug into letting him back, and said he never believed himself capable of that heroic sacrifice at all?
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Date: 2013-01-23 04:46 pm (UTC)Indeed.
And if he couldn't be let go (let's face it, view counts and all) why not bring him back in a way that didn't read like a psychotic breakdown where a hallucination bullied Doug into letting him back, and said he never believed himself capable of that heroic sacrifice at all?