I like how you got into Mohinder's head here; how you described how defeated he felt and then how violent he wanted to get Mohinder is ... difficult. But writing angry people is easy, so his voice came more naturally than I would have expected. Thank you very much for the feedback!
when Sylar used Molly as a motivational tool. He probably would do something like that to push Mohinder's buttons. He WOULD. Plus I had to drag Molly in somehow, poor little girl ...
AYYIIIIIII! Thank you oh so very much! *dances about*
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Date: 2008-11-04 09:59 pm (UTC)I like how you got into Mohinder's head here; how you described how defeated he felt and then how violent he wanted to get
Mohinder is ... difficult. But writing angry people is easy, so his voice came more naturally than I would have expected. Thank you very much for the feedback!
when Sylar used Molly as a motivational tool. He probably would do something like that to push Mohinder's buttons.
He WOULD. Plus I had to drag Molly in somehow, poor little girl ...
AYYIIIIIII! Thank you oh so very much! *dances about*