RAPID-FIRE CHALLENGE PART 2 (12 drabbles)
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aunt_zeldaAuthor: me,
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Prompt #: 32/33/47, 46, 38, 24, 23, 22, 19, 18, 15, 14, 13, 6 (TWELVE)
Pairings: Mylar, tiny bit of Kiro, a tiny bit of Claire/Monica, tiny bit of Plaude.
Rating: there are some naughty words, but overall the material is PG-13-ish.
Warnings: Mostly S2 of Heroes …
Summary: Mylar rocks my mismatched socks, I’m getting more interested in femslash, Kiro is depressing and so is Plaude and I didn’t write much of either please don’t kill me mods!
A/N: not so good this week, guys. I had a BEASTLY couple of days, cried, shouted at homophobes, squee-jigged about Torchwood, danced, snowshoed, and was generally exhausted. I spent a lot of Saturday and today trying vainly to catch up on slash, so most of these are Mylar, most of these are not very good. Also MY FINAL INSTALLMENT FOR RAPID-FIRE! I WILL WRITE NO MORE DRABBLES FOR IT! *exhausted*
Btw, the strange fic about ‘
http://aunt-zelda.livejournal.com/43977.html - Installment 1: 18 fics
Prompt #: 06 Prophetic.
Pairings: Mylar, Kiro, Claire/Monica, Plaude.
Rating: PG-13-ish.
Warnings: none.
Summary: Peter paints some pretty pictures …
Word Count: 200
Peter jerked back from the dripping canvas, reeling back into reality as Isaac’s power fled.
There were four paintings in front of him, each depicting a different set of people Peter knew.
The first painting was done in red and black. It showed Sylar pinning Mohinder to a wall, eyes alight with red and Mohinder’s wide with terror. Peter jumped slightly: Sylar’s right hand was groping Mohinder.
Shaken, Peter turned to the second painting: Hiro, flat on the ground in a graveyard, being straddled by … Adam?! A blurry woman clad in black stood in the background, arms crossed, Hiro’s sword in hand.
Peter was beginning to wonder what was in the paints he’d used.
The third painting seemed innocent at first: two girls sitting on a bench in a pretty park. Then Peter realized that the girls were holding hands and kissing, and one of them was his niece, Claire.
“What the hell?” Peter wondered aloud, hoping that there was some sanity in the last painting …
… which was a rather graphic depiction of Peter himself, naked, in bed with none other than ‘Claude Rains.’
“Jesus Christ what is going on?” Peter yelped, staggering backward from the painting.
Prompt #: 13 Broken.
Pairings: Kiro, Plaude, and Mylar (all squint-worthy.)
Rating: PG-13-ish …
Warnings: oddness on my part.
Summary: Volume III is gonna be about broken peoples …
Word Count: 236
Hiro had drunk sake once and a while in his life, had a beer with Ando from time to time, but he never drank that much.
Now, with Adam screaming in his head all the time, alcohol was the only thing that he could turn to.
~*~
I’m coming for you, Hiro Nakamura …
“Don’t worry, baby,” Adam’s latest wife smiled grimly at him as she drove down the highway. “We’re gonna get him.”
Adam leaned over and kissed her cheek. Yes, yes we are …I’ll teach you to betray me twice, carp …
~*~
Peter slammed his fist into the wall. Ever since Nathan had been killed, he’d been working tirelessly to bring down the Company night and day, delving through archives and forming an uneasy alliance with Mohinder and Noah.
During all this deception and spying his thoughts began to stray to Claude, the only man who hated the Company just as much as, if not more than, Peter.
Claude could help them in the fight against the Company – that was why Peter thought about the invisible man so much … there was no other reason …
~*~
You broke me, Mohinder …
Sylar sent a dumpster flying on his way to Suresh’s apartment.
But I know how things work. I know how to fix myself …
Sylar smirked, stopping cars in their tracks as he stormed across the street.
I’ll break you back.
Prompt #: 14 Collection.
Pairing: Kiro (if ya squint)
Rating: PG-13-ish
Warnings: Kiro is really depressing.
Summary: Hiro owned every book about Takezo Kensai there was.
Word Count: 159
Hiro owned every book about Takezo Kensai there was. Every history, every children’s book, every story his father had told him as a child. They had their own shelf in his bedroom and their worn spines used to give him comfort in his uncertain life.
No more.
Now the sight of them made him feel sick. The books seemed to mock him, blame him, accuse him, whisper to him with Adam’s voice late into the night …
You were more than a friend to me …
Hiro sat up in bed and turned on the light, glaring at the books.
Fine, if they wouldn’t shut up, he’d get rid of them …
He spent an hour packing the books into cardboard boxes, then teleported into a storage facility and left them there. Sighing with relief, Hiro climbed back into bed, anticipating an easy sleep …
Oh, come on carp, you didn’t think it would be that easy, did you?
Prompt #: 15 Chenille.
Pairing: Claire/Monica
Rating: (to be safe)
Warnings: femslash, which I keep telling you lot I am NOT good at.
Summary: What are you making sweaters for?
Word Count: 110
“What’s that?” Claire asked incredulously.
Monica looked up, needles pausing for a second. “Chenille yarn. I watched a video on knitting and now I’m making sweaters.”
Claire snorted. “What are you making sweaters for? It’s ninety degrees in the shade outside!”
Monica laughed. “Well, if we turn the air conditioner on real high it’ll get very chilly in here and …”
Claire raised her eyebrows. “And?”
Monica smiled that smile of hers that made Claire weak in the knees. “And we can put on all of these sweaters … and warm each other up.”
Claire picked up the spare needles. “You know what? Suddenly I’m very interested in knitting …”
Prompt #: 18 Reckoning
Pairing: Mylar
Rating: PG-13-ish
Warnings: semi-domestic bickering.
Summary: Regretting your decision?
Word Count: 260 (sorry)
“What, no cuddling?”
“Shut up.”
“Oho … morning-after jitters? Regretting your decision?”
Mohinder pulls on a shirt, averting the eyes of the man in his bed. “Last night was nothing, do you understand me? Nothing. Just me protecting my daughter.”
Sylar rolls his eyes and climbs out of bed. “I never mentioned the girl. I never made threats.” he begins to get dressed as well. “You seem determined to paint me as a sad freak who has to coerce people for sex. You fit that profile more than I do … don’t you walk away from me!” the door immediately slams shut. “This was not a one-time deal, Mohinder! We need to discuss this like adults!”
Mohinder spins around. “There’s nothing to discuss!” he yells, yanking on the doorknob. “Let me out or –”
“Just answer me this,” Sylar says, cutting him off. “What are you more embarrassed about? Banging a man or banging your father’s murderer?”
Mohinder freezes.
“You’ve got to think about that, haven’t you?” Sylar strides across the room and seizes Mohinder’s shoulders. “Look at me,” he demands softly, forcing Mohinder’s head up with his hand. “Tell me you hate me … tell me you want me dead …”
Mohinder doesn’t say a word, unable to tear his eyes away from Sylar’s.
Sylar leans down to whisper into Mohinder’s ear, “Say you love me …”
Mohinder pauses, then shoves Sylar back.
“You will never hear me say that.” he hisses, yanking the door open and storming off to his job, plagued by feelings he wishes didn’t exist.
Prompt #: 19 Sketch.
Pairing: Mylar
Rating: PG-13-ish
Warnings: Odd setup …
Summary: I don’t WANT the List …
Word Count: 154
“I don’t have the List.”
“I don’t want the List.”
“I don’t know where Matt took Molly.”
“I don’t care about the cop and the brat.”
“I’m not going to beg for my life.”
“I’m not going to kill you.”
“I won’t tell you a thing, no matter how long you tor–”
“SHUT UP!”
…
“You just kissed me.”
“Yes I did.”
“On the lips.”
“Yes I did.”
“You’re disgusting and unnatural and –”
“You’re not talking about the killings anymore, are you?”
“No! If you –”
“Force you? I’d never settle for anything less than consensual sex …”
“Well you can forget about that with me!”
…
“Why aren’t you hurting me?”
“The last thing you need right now is more abuse, Mohinder.”
“Get away from me!”
“What are you so afraid of?”
“A serial-killer who wants to jump my bones!”
…
“… fair enough.”
“What? You’re leaving?”
“I’ll be back …”
Prompt #: 22 Monster.
Pairing: Mylar (Mywalker fam)
Rating: R for naughty words.
Warnings: Molly explaining why I did not have time to write many drabbles this week.
Summary: S-stupid guys … at school!
Word Count: 121
“How can people be so cruel?” Mohinder whispered, shutting Molly’s bedroom door: their daughter had come home in tears once again. This time two boys had been confusing pedophiles with gays.
Sylar’s fists clenched. “May I go and murder them?” he asked.
Mohinder shook his head. “I’m afraid not …”
“Could I just freak them out? Maybe use that illusion power to –”
“Sylar, dear, you can’t do that. Besides, I thought you’d given up killing people!”
“Homophobes don’t count as people!” Sylar snapped.
Mohinder sighed. “I wish everyone else saw things that way.”
The raw hurt in his eyes jerked Sylar out of his fury. He embraced his partner, filing away his anger … for now. “Yeah, me too …”
Prompt #: 23 Defense.
Pairing: Mylar (if ya squint)
Rating: PG-13-ish.
Warnings: none.
Summary: You and I have trust-issues, doctor …
Word Count: 162
Mohinder will think up every excuse and hurl every plausible reason to explain Sylar’s behavior around him, but the frightening truth is that the murderer treats him like a friend. Sylar seems to view him as an equal, worthy of much more attention than any of the others: Peter, Noah, Matt, Elle …
Even Maya, whom Mohinder knew had been ‘involved’ with the latest ‘Zane’ had earned no more than an eye-roll and a bullet.
Sometimes Mohinder reviews the tapes from the security cameras, machoistically trying to find that murderous glint in Sylar’s eye that was there when he was cutting into Peter Petrelli’s skull:
“You and I have trust-issues, doctor …”
He can’t find it.
Thinking back on every time Sylar has had him at his ‘mercy’ Mohinder can’t recall that bloodlust anywhere.
Annoyance: yes. Smugness: yes. Sarcasm: yes.
Hurt: yes.
That terrifies Mohinder.
“If you hadn’t arrived Sylar would have slaughtered us all.”
Mohinder’s walls of reason are crumbling down.
Prompt #: 24 Offense.
Pairing: Mylar
Rating: PG-13-ish.
Warnings: I don’t talk much on the phone, nor have I ever been arrested.
Summary: I’m … um … I’m in jail.
Word Count: 241
“Mohinder …”
There was only one voice that said his name like that.
“Sylar?” Mohinder managed to croak. “How did you get this phone?!”
“How do you think, dear doctor? It started ringing in the pocket of that shocking blond girl … such a delicious power I’ve got now … why did you call her, anyway?”
Mohinder cleared his throat. “I’m … um … I’m in jail.”
Sylar laughed. “Jail? Well, that’s not good, you’re much too pretty to stay locked up with only perverts for company …”
Mohinder slumped. “Just when I thought this day couldn’t get any worse …”
Sylar snorted. “Why are you talking to me, Mohinder? I thought you loathed me …”
“I was arrested and this is my only phone call!”
“Fine, snap at your only Get-Out-of-Jail-Free card! That’s certain to make me interrupt my busy schedule to swoop in and rescue you!”
Mohinder was about to hang up when Sylar started talking again.
“Tell you what,” the usual ‘tiger-toying-with-prey’ tone was back. “I’ll bail you out. Save your precious Company the trouble. Are you at the downtown station?”
Mohinder mouthed wordlessly. “I … what?!”
“Downtown?” Sylar repeated.
“Yes …” Mohinder was glad he was sitting down because the room seemed to be spinning. “Why are you –?”
“What can I say, doctor?” Sylar said as the guard motioned for Mohinder to wrap it up.
“I like the idea of having you in my debt …”
Prompt #: 38 Light.
Pairing: Kiro (squint) Adam/10th Wifey
Rating: PG-13-ish.
Warnings: OMG HET!
Summary: Sorry darling …
Word Count: 246
Adam flinches: sun sending his eyes into shock. “Ow!” he complains, rubbing his eyelids and blinking furiously.
“Sorry darling,” his wife says, hoisting him out of the coffin and onto the ground, where he immediately collapses: legs out of use for too long.
“How long?” Adam asks, throat raspy. He accepts the bottled water she hands him and gulps greedily.
She flops down onto the ground beside him. “Three weeks. Bastard hid you but good …”
Adam’s eyes are slowly adjusting, he can make out the color of her hair, the blue of her shirt, the curve of her mouth …
He drops the empty water bottle and lunges forward, tackling her to the ground, reclaiming her mouth with his …
Afterwards they slip their clothes back on and head for the car she has obtained.
“I know where this Hiro guy lives,” she announces as she slams the door. “Already programmed the address into the MapQuest.”
Adam plants another kiss onto her forehead. “God I love you …”
She grins. “Consider it a ‘Welcome-Back’ present. Least I could do, help you kill the guy who put you in the ground.”
For the first time in years, a pang of doubt spikes through Adam’s body. Does he really want Hiro dead? He wants his carp … Hiro to suffer, certainly, but die?
Hoping the drive is long, Adam settles himself into the passenger’s seat, weighing three weeks in a coffin against never seeing Hiro smile again.
Prompt #: 46 Princess Bride.
Pairing: Mylar (somewhat)
Rating: PG-13-ish
Warnings: none.
Summary: Hello, my name is Mohinder Suresh; you killed my father; prepare to die.
Word Count: 254 (sorry)
Mohinder had finally cornered Sylar. This was it: he’d been waiting for many months to do this. That’s why he’d joined the Company and agreed to capture Claire with Nikessa the Strong Woman and Bob the Sicilian (the later now deceased.) Thankfully the man with the horn-rimmed glasses (also known as Noah) held no grudges after the scuffle they’d had at the Cliffs of Insanity and (after a resurrection) agreed to aid Mohinder in his quest to kill Sylar, as long as he had enough time to rescue his daughter form the evil Company Man.
“Hello, my name is Mohinder Suresh; you killed my father; prepare to die.”
After a rather epic fight Mohinder had Sylar disarmed and pinned to the wall. Mohinder was about to pull the trigger at last when Sylar did something extraordinary.
He kissed Mohinder.
Not a proper, beautiful, romantic kiss. This was a kiss full of desperation and lust and was also rather bloody because Sylar’s lip had split during the fight.
Mohinder staggered back, aroused and disgusted with himself. He said, very quickly, “Hello, my name is Mohinder Suresh; you killed my father; prepare to die!” and shot Sylar in the chest. “That was just to the left of your heart,” Mohinder shot again. “That was just below your heart …”
Sylar died of terror.
Mohinder sighed, memorizing every detail of the corpse before him. Then he dropped the gun, turned on his heel, and staggered off to find the man in the horn-rimmed glasses, Claire, and Nikessa.
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Prompt #: 32 Watch, 33 Cogs, 47
Pairing: Naveen Atlas (I’ve changed his last name) and Mr. Rolex
Rating: R for attempted-rape.
Warnings: It’s too long …
Summary: Rolex Man, Rolex Man, doin’ the things that a Rolex can …
Word Count: 305 (SORRY!)
Mr. Rolex’s head snapped around: that girl, the one Naveen took care of, crying out in fear and pain …
What should he do? Screams like hers were not uncommon, particularly in this part of town … why were his feet guiding him towards her cries and the heartbeats of several excited thugs?
This didn’t make sense, he wasn’t supposed to care about the red-haired brat …
And yet here he was, at the head of an alley, watching the girl struggle futilely against four young men. Her rainbow skirt was ripped and there was a red patch on her cheek where someone had recently slapped her.
Mr. Rolex’s fists clenched.
Tick … tock …
~*~
A knock at the door.
“Janny? Thank Shiva …” Naveen yanked the door open. His relieved smile was suddenly replaced by a horrified gasp.
On the threshold stood Mr. Rolex, looking as disdainful and menacing as ever, holding the unconscious form of Janny in his arms.
“I didn’t do this, you fool,” Mr. Rolex snapped, brushing past Naveen and setting Janny down on the couch. “Stupid girl when through the badlands and ran into trouble. You’re lucky I was passing by.”
Naveen was stills standing by the door, staring at Mr. Rolex. “Th-thank you …”
“Not enough.” Mr. Rolex snapped, slamming Naveen into the wall with ease. “Words mean nothing, I want to you kiss me.”
Naveen gasped. “N–”
“You might want to rethink that answer, doctor, or I’ll throw the girl back where I found her and make you watch.”
Naveen paused for a split second, then smashed his lips gracelessly against Mr. Rolex’s smirking mouth.
Mr. Rolex ran his tongue over Naveen’s lips, chuckling as Naveen shoved him backwards.
“So long, doctor …” Mr. Rolex made a mocking bow and marched off, snapping his fingers rhythmically.
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Date: 2008-01-27 07:20 pm (UTC)“Homophobes don’t count as people!” <---I CONCUR! Fuckers...I got into a fight with two senior homophobes this week (I'm a junior) Bastards..I hate them. I'm sorry you had trouble with them this week! *hugs*
# 23 Defense...WOW..It's so true, I love it!
Adam and his wife...*shudder* I'm not going to be too happy with that setup in the show. Oh well, I'll learn to live. I just wish romance would be thrown out of the show except for the plentiful subtext.
Rolex Man, Rolex Man, doin’ the things that a Rolex can …<---..*gigglesnort* This is so great..I had the beat in my head the entire time I read the drabble. Great job with that one by the way, interesting world. Forced kissing and hopefully other things happen there and that makes me happy. (as long as it's slashy) lol
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Date: 2008-01-27 07:30 pm (UTC)06 Prophetic: omg, Peter is so scarred for life. XD
Peter was beginning to wonder what was in the paints he’d used. <---- loved this line!
Loved all of Broken.
Collection is an excellent view of the perpetual guilt Hiro must be feeling. I mean, he's definitely not an innately cruel person.
Reckoning made me giggle, a lot. Especially since I'm basically struggling with writing a much longer version of the same scene for Understanding right now. ^^; Not as funny as this though...
Sketch was, quite possibly, my favourite. Oblivious!Mohinder makes me giggle!squee. ^_^
“… fair enough.”
“What? You’re leaving?”
“I’ll be back …” <--- Mohinder's upset that Sylar's leaving! I swear!
Monster: ugh *hugs* I have so much empathy for you right now. I'm always so worried about who I come out to... and the people I work with must never, ever know. I've sat in silence and tried to ignore their occasionally gay-bashing jokes far too many times. Maybe they wouldn't do it if they knew... but I don't have that much faith in humanity. Or at least this sample of it.
Defense: 100% agree with pretty much everything in this drabble. ^_^
Offense: I'm starting to have serious love for the idea of Sylar bailing Mohinder out of jail to save him from leering cell-mates.
Rolex Man, Rolex Man, doin’ the things that a Rolex can …
*falls out of chair laughing*
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Date: 2008-01-27 07:39 pm (UTC)I just loved Defense and Offense. I really love the idea of Mohinder searching through the tapes (he and Elle really are soulmates) looking for menace and not finding any. I can totally see this canonically being the way he finally admits to himself that there is something deep going on between him and Sylar (if he doesn't already know it). And the line where Mohinder says he's only talking ot him because it's the only phone call he gets made me laugh out loud. Literally. Although, sad that Sylar killed Elle. I don't love her, but I still don't want him to kill her.
I have a feeling that when the show comes back, the way they'll handle Adam and his bride will be by making it into a Sark/Lauren situation rather than something gross and schmoopy.
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Date: 2008-01-27 07:53 pm (UTC)All of these are wonderful.
I absolutely loved this:
'You broke me, Mohinder …
Sylar sent a dumpster flying on his way to Suresh’s apartment.
But I know how things work. I know how to fix myself …
Sylar smirked, stopping cars in their tracks as he stormed across the street.
I’ll break you back.'
Perfection. Seriously.
And I love the argument in "Reckoning" where Sylar tries to get Mohinder to admit to loving him and Mohinder refuses (yet could not tell him he hated him or wanted him dead).
I have all sorts of naughty ideas with Mohinder being in Sylar's debt at the end of "Offense" :^)
And "Defense" is excellent. I love how in the drabble you still hit all the pertinent points about Sylar not wanting to kill Mohinder. The last line is heartbreakingly beautiful: "Mohinder’s walls of reason are crumbling down."
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Date: 2008-01-27 08:43 pm (UTC)Broken...I just imagine Mohinder's look when Sylar comes crashing into his apartment...poor guy...
Sketch...I love it when people can tell whole stories through dialog...and it was fast and catchy...
Monster makes me want to hit something...homophobia should be classified as a dangerous illness...and they should have to undergo treatment...
And offense was just fun. *EG*
cheers
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Date: 2008-01-27 09:41 pm (UTC)Seriously. *loves it* Peter's so hilarious. XDD
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Date: 2008-01-27 09:44 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2008-01-28 12:18 am (UTC)Broken: This really does follow the "rapid-fire" feel of the challenge, and it works extremely well. I like how you abruptly change between "scenes", much like a Heroes episode would, and I can just imagine Sylar flinging all that stuff out of his way as he's - once again- on his way back to Suresh. Very nice ^^
Collection: Once again, you pull off the angsty Kiro very well, and I think that Hiro would actually teleport the books away - it seems like something he would do. Also, the ending is both chilling/perfect.
Chenille: Aww, cute Claire/Monica again!! Once again, I think you do the femmeslash very well; it's subtle, but it's good and this drabble especially made me smile. I like that you incorporated Monica's power, her exchange with Claire seemed IC and this was all just so warm and fluffy that I really enjoyed it.
Reckoning: Ooooh... that was GOOD. Like, insanely good. I love how honest it is in bringing up the whole "you killed my father" thing; it's something that they will never be able to ignore and the whole conversation between them is just amazing. *Glomps you*
Sketch: I like how this is all just dialogue, because it leaves a lot to the readers' imagination. I also like that you went the way of Sylar wanting Mohinder to want him, instead of going down the whole "Sylar ravaging Mohinder" path. Great drabble!
Monster: To me, writing is a great way to de-stress or to channel negative emotions, and that you could take a part of your personal life and apply it to your fic is great. I hope that it helped you a little to write through the anger, and I did like this drabble and how you wrote about how homosexuals might feel if they heard your story.
*Will post more in a little bit!*
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Date: 2008-01-28 12:22 am (UTC)Naveen makes me think of the guy who plays Sayid on LOST. Mmm...
Anyway, great job!
(You're also getting me to like Plaude better too, darn you! ^_^)
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Date: 2008-01-28 06:04 am (UTC)Forget sweaters, girls. Get naked. Invite Elle. Invite Niki.
Sylar leans down to whisper into Mohinder’s ear, “Say you love me …” Holy shit. That's hot.
“A serial-killer who wants to jump my bones!” … “… fair enough.” LOL. Extremely LOL.
Homophobes don't count as people, it's true.
Sylar wouldn't hurt Mohinder (except in a sexy way). I like the comparison between how Sylar treats Mo and Maya. Mylar pwns Maylar.
You killed Elle! You bastard!
And you introduced The Wife without describing her, you tricksy thing.
I like the Princess Bride comparison, but then my brain went to the Noah/Claire place.
Mr. Rolex! I love this series so much!
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Date: 2008-01-29 12:46 am (UTC)13: EEP! I don’t know who to comfort first, Hiro or Sylar!
14: Okay, it has been decided - Hiro gets the first of my comfort! <3
15: Hehe. That reminds me of something I once told a customer… She called in for a hotel in CA and you have to do the entire spiel there - listing everything from the deck to the fireplaces. Yeah, she laughed at me and said she doubted she could use the fireplace, so I suggested she turn the air conditioner on real high, close the windows, and that then she could… I’m sooo lucky that I wasn’t being monitored by my boss.
18: Awwww. He said that Sylar would never hear him SAY it, not that he would never feel it. Man, that would be one awkward situation to try and analyze. I love it! <3
19: Eeep? Whoa. Mohinder totally had that argument with himself…
22: Awwww! That would be so hard on them all. Molly, as a little girl - them for having to try and protect her from it along with the experience. Poor them!
23: That IS an interesting point that Mohinder really should look into. Hehe!
24: Hehehehe. Yeah, this one ROCKED. I wonder what Mohinder was in for? *Scritches head* Eh, his hero will get him out!
38: That was pretty sweet, weighing death vs. loss of smile and all! Mmm, Adam can be really interesting <3
46: Whoa. Hahaha! Omg but this one amused me! I can picture Mohinder shooting, getting annoyed when he keeps missing his shot - then Sylar dying from terror? Heh.
32, 33, 47: EEP! Innnnnteresting! <3
Man, I loved them all! Thank you sooo much for sharing them. I’ve fallen pretty far behind in my reading but I’m going to try to catch up tonight - and to get some writing done. I was really excited to see that you did some drabbles! <3
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Date: 2008-02-01 07:49 am (UTC)Defense: Okay, I absolutely LOVED this one!! It's so great to read fic about Mohinder realizing that Sylar sees him as a friend (or more than a friend...), and the last line is just pure WIN! It's all just so perfect :D
Offense: OMG, Sylar going to save jailed Mohinder?? That's one of the most hilarious scenarios, and you managed to keep it serious with a perfect balance of slight humor. I also like how you don't explain how Mohinder landed up in jail, because it leaves us readers to come up with our own ideas. Great job on this one!
Light: I love how you used the GN as inspiration for this prompt. And wow, Adam and his wife are pretty hardcore if they're doin' it in a graveyard, LOL. It sounds just like him, though. I like how he falters at the end, and, even after everything that Hiro has done to him, he still can't bring himself to want to kill the guy. I mean, he didn't even want to kill Hiro earlier; instead, he said that he'd make Hiro's life miserable, and later on he left the job for Peter to do. I think that's why Kiro works so well, because neither are willing to cause each other's death. Okay, goodbye tangent!
The Princess Bride: Oh no, Mohinder actually did it! *Weeps* Actually, I think that's a very honest portrayal of Mylar, and I like how you linked it with the movie, and added the same elements of the story in with this drabble (like with the fairy-tale like names and the backgrounds story.) And wow, that kiss was HOT!
Nightmare Land: Ooooh, such an interesting take on Mylar! I like the gritty, comic-book feel of it - it reminds me of Sin City for some reason; it's got the same film noir tone/dialogue of the movie). Really intense, and, for the thousandth time, I loved it!
You did an amazing job on these drabbles!! I can't wait to see your longer fic when you're finished with that! And I haven't forgotten about your rec list for me; I will be making my way through that now that the challenge is over and I'm starting to finish catching up on the drabbles...
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Date: 2008-02-03 01:18 am (UTC)"It showed Sylar pinning Mohinder to a wall, eyes alight with red and Mohinder’s wide with terror. Peter jumped slightly: Sylar’s right hand was groping Mohinder." <--*really wants to own that painting*
And I want that Plaude one too. XD I loved when Peter 'wondered' about what was in the paint. If I had been in his situation I would have been asking myself the same thing. Hee!
Broken: Oooo! Now this one was really nice. I like the connection you made between Peter and Claude; them both hating the company now. My favourite part of this drabble was the Sylar part though: "I’ll break you back." Yes, you do that Sylar. Break Mo good! XD
Collection: Oh! The haunting insanity was really nice. I like how Hiro envisions the books as 'mocking' him. :D Really nice!
Chenille: Erm...Okay, I can't explain this well but I think you captured the interaction/communication/flirting(?) part of the relationship between Claire and Monica really well in this drabble. It seemed very...human and realistic. ^^;;
Reckoning: "“You will never hear me say that.” he hisses, yanking the door open and storming off to his job, plagued by feelings he wishes didn’t exist." Oh!!! Oh. Oh. Oh. YES! This one...This one wins gold stars! The tension between them, the conflict, the emotions...just everything was right! :D *huggles drabble*
Sketch: *gigglespazz* Ooo! Dialogue fic. Those are so rare. XD I really liked the exchange between Mo and Sy. Mo's slow reaction to the kiss was perfect.
Monster:
"Homophobes don’t count as people!” Sylar snapped.
Mohinder sighed. “I wish everyone else saw things that way.” Me too guys! Me too! Poor Molly. :(
Defense: I'm glad Mohinder's starting to figure things out. XD Though, it probably will take him a long while to accept. :-\
Offense: *gigglesnort* Heeheeheehee!!! XD Mo in jail and Sylar bailing him out!?! LOL! I'm way too amused by that. Good job!
Light: I hope Adam weighs in favour of keeping Hiro alive. Actually, that's interesting to think about too. Will Adam ever kill Hiro? I hope not.
Princess Bride: Aww...Poor Sylar. But at least he tried to save himself. XD Mohinder continually missing must have really sucked.
Nightmare Land: *gigglespazz* Heeheehee!! Go Mr. Rolex Go! I'm really starting to love this verse! :D
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