http://angary.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] angary.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] aunt_zelda 2008-11-04 02:48 am (UTC)

Short, sweet, and full of Mylary goodness!

I like how you got into Mohinder's head here; how you described how defeated he felt and then how violent he wanted to get when Sylar used Molly as a motivational tool. He probably would do something like that to push Mohinder's buttons. Also, I think this line is great:

You figured out how he works long ago...
It works so well for the Mohinder/Sylar dynamic - the wording is perfect. Fantastic job on this!

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