ext_60793 ([identity profile] levitatethis.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] aunt_zelda 2008-01-27 07:53 pm (UTC)

Yay, a Mr. Rolex and Naveen drabble! It's awesome.

All of these are wonderful.

I absolutely loved this:

'You broke me, Mohinder …

Sylar sent a dumpster flying on his way to Suresh’s apartment.

But I know how things work. I know how to fix myself …

Sylar smirked, stopping cars in their tracks as he stormed across the street.

I’ll break you back.'

Perfection. Seriously.

And I love the argument in "Reckoning" where Sylar tries to get Mohinder to admit to loving him and Mohinder refuses (yet could not tell him he hated him or wanted him dead).

I have all sorts of naughty ideas with Mohinder being in Sylar's debt at the end of "Offense" :^)

And "Defense" is excellent. I love how in the drabble you still hit all the pertinent points about Sylar not wanting to kill Mohinder. The last line is heartbreakingly beautiful: "Mohinder’s walls of reason are crumbling down."






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